Editor & Writing Coach: Making Words Behave Since 1996
A Manuscript Review is not a fault-finding mission. As a writer myself, I have tremendous respect for the work and commitment it takes to produce any manuscript. I will tell you when something works, and make suggestions where your manuscript can be improved.
A Manuscript Review Report covers the following categories, as well as any issues that are specific to your work:
Does your story flow well? Is the plot clear and believable? Is the plot logical? Are there any holes or loose strings?
Is there enough conflict (external and internal) to move the story along? Is the conflict clear and consistent? Does it change naturally in response to plot and character changes? Is the conflict resolved or replaced by the end of the story? If the conflict continues, is there enough plot or theme resolution?
Is the setting appropriate for the story and time? Is there enough or too much description? Do the descriptions help to set the tone for the story? Are they consistent and accurate?
Do the characters seem real? Can the reader empathize with (or dislike) them? Are the personalities and issues consistent? Does the main character undergo some change during the story? Are there too many or too few characters? Do their backstories make sense? Is there too much or too little backstory? Do the characters respond naturally to changes in the plot and setting?
Is the dialogue believable, understandable, natural? Does each character have a unique and consistent voice? Does the dialogue reflect and respond naturally to changes in characterization, plot, setting?
Is the point of view/perspective consistent? When it changes, does the change make sense? Does it add to, or detract from, the telling of the story? Is the reader able to follow the change?
Is there a good balance of show and tell? Was there enough detailed description where needed? Was there too much exposition, or was it in the wrong place?
Were there many errors or common mistakes? Was there an overuse of any particular grammatical symbol (e.g., exclamation marks) or phrasing? Do the grammatical differences in character voices make sense?